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Aug 09, 2008, 07:21 AM // 07:21
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Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Aug 2006
Guild: None.
Profession: Me/
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Quick Sketch
Quick sketch of a monk, no detail or shading. Criticisms wanted
 http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3170/scankl8.jpg Mouth kind of bugs me...eh |
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Aug 09, 2008, 08:28 AM // 08:28
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: N/
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The right eye sorta tilts funny and the mouth looks a bit odd, but other than that its really nice.
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Aug 09, 2008, 12:37 PM // 12:37
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Guild: [DRAK]
Profession: W/
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Nice! If you're serious about drawing and stuff read the stuff bellow, if not just ignore it
well you said crits wantedShoulder not wide enough (it should be three heads wide) Eyes aren't aligned properly Mouth isn't aligned properly the shape of the head is wrong left arm goes too high, looks like she broke her arm trunk too short I'd suggest some good anatomy studies from Loomis bridgeman hogarth, etc if you're really serious about art. References are good too, like taking a screenshot of monk in game (not tracing) |
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Aug 09, 2008, 12:47 PM // 12:47
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Frost Gate Guardian
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: The Netherlands
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very nice sketch, just as mentionden above maybe work on anatomy. The only time you can ´change´ the anatomy is when you make the boobs bigger.
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